Give your audience all the ingredients of your story, time scaling, goals being set up
Each story should included
- Set up (beginning)
- Development (middle)
- Resolution (end)
In every script must included, every scene, act, dialogue, action and movement
The hook is the bulk of the setup, putting your character into action, making them who they are. My hook is going to be the mother of the white child coming to the park and taking the boy away and telling him not to plan with the black little boy because of his race, there must also be a pause for reflection after the climax 'breathing moment' so I'm thinking about having the little boy play by himself in the park and a peaceful scene no dialogue.
There is then going to be a dramatic climax, the bit of the story that shows no point of return when the little Kenyan boy goes home to a quite violent mother, as parenting styles are different in a very African background as they have a stronger approach to their children and a heavy involvement with education and social lives, I was going to have a strict mother angry at her child for going out to play football she then gets angry with him and strikes her child, which to a different culture is a regular thing however to an English audience this would be seen as shocking. I might then have the racist family ban the other child from playing with the little black boy, however I wasn't sure how this could show a change, or an overcome problem, and shows no resolution at the end?
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