Directions unit - Script synopsis

My script theme was based on 'freedom' so i basically thought of basing the main charracter of a boy who has recently become single and is feeling 'free' his character will be a comical one who is a bit of a laugh, I'm having the package to be a engagement ring that is no longer needed and is bring returned as a result of the relationship not working out, as a contrast I was going to have the second character as a 'sad' girlfriend quite upset compared to the 'lad' and free feeling boy who realised he made a mistake purposing, my style will have a comical feel and follows the journey of the boy. It will start with a upbeat tempo, portrayed by his personality but then quickly changes with the ex-partner comes in to give the ring back, I hope to show this through my directions and coverage of shots